I recently read two books on speaking and thought I’d review them together. TJ Walker’s Secret to Foolproof Presentations was sent to me by the Jess Todtfeld, complete with a sticker that says, “Autographed by the author.” My understanding is that Jess and TJ are partners and the book cover includes “with Jess Todtfeld” under TJ Walker’s name. Jess asked if I’d be willing to review the book. I said yes, so he sent it to me.

Confessions of a Public Speaker by Scott Berkun simply arrived in the mail a couple of months ago. No e-mail, no note, nothing.  But I was traveling to my parents’ house, so I took it along.

Both books contain valuable information, but they couldn’t be more different in tone and approach. But in the end, most good advice on speaking is pretty similar, so there’s a lot of overlap in content.

Secret to Foolproof Presentations

TJ Walker teaches presentation skills classes and to some extent the book is an advertisement for his business. He also does a clever thing: at the end of each chapter, he invites you to his site to get more information on the topic. This requires registering, so he’s also building his e-mail list. That is a great marketing idea and I must admit I’m jealous.

TJ Walker has a brash, up-front tone that I liked. For example, in explaining that you should videotape yourself practicing, he says, “I will warn you, if you have never seen a video of yourself speaking, you will not like enjoy watching one. Tough! Your audience has to watch you; shouldn’t you know what they are seeing and hearing?”

In the Introduction, he gives away is one big secret to giving a foolproof presentation: “Develop an audience-focused perspective rather than a speaker-focused perspective.” Then he explains that the way to find out what the audience wants to hear, whether your slides work, and so on is to simply ask them.

Each chapter title is a question. Some samples are:

• What is the best way for me to start my presentations?
• Should I use PowerPoint or other technology to enhance my presentation?
• How do I connect with my audience?
• How do I get rid of my “ums” and “uhs”?

TJ is big on finding a way to become more memorable, that is, making sure your audience remembers what you said. He’s mostly talking about business presentations that are meant to persuade an audience. He talks a lot about sales presentations.

The book is a quick read and contains lots of useful advice for people who need to give effective presentations, that is, presentations that have the desired effect on the audience. And TJ and Jess are great marketers!

Confessions of a Public Speaker

I’ve never heard of Scott Berkun. I’m not too clear on what he talks about; I think he talks about learning and creativity. He’s done some training as well. He also has an interesting marketing technique: at the end of the book, he asks readers to review it on Amazon, write about the book in their blog (which I’m doing now), recommend the book, go to his web site, etc. Why don’t I think of these things?

But the tone of his book is very different. Scott thinks of himself as a thinker and that shows. The tone was much more personal. I found some of the stories boring, but he has some unique insights that seem to have come from reflecting on his own experience. Nevertheless, he has read a lot on the topic of speaking and shares quotes from other books.

Here are some of the ideas in his book that I found interesting and useful:

• If you have a few people in the audience in a large room, ask them to move forward to get them together and create a “more intimate space.”  His tips to get compliance: “Make it a game. Offer a prize to the person who gets up first. Ask the audience members if they need more exercise today, and when they all raise their hands … tell them you have just the thing for them to do.”
• Make sure you have something valuable to say. “It is possible to become an eloquent speaker, who makes beautiful slides and has a great vocabulary and perfect diction, without having much to say…The problem with most bad presentations I see is not the speaking, the slides, the visuals, or any of the things people obsess about. Instead, it’s the lack of thinking.”
• Think and prepare before you speak. “Making a point, teaching a lesson, or conveying a feeling to others first requires thinking, lots and lots of thinking, before the speaking ever happens.” He continues a bit later, “If you can’t spend 5 or 10 hours preparing for them, thinking about them, and refining your points to best suit their needs, what does that say about your respect for your audience’s time?”
• The title of your talk is important. The author gives lots of examples and tips for creating a title that will get people interested, actually communicate something, and even ehlp you construct the rest of your talk.
• It’s OK to use a simple outline or short list (but you probably shouldn’t write it on your hand). No, he didn’t say that last part.

At the end are two great chapters with quick advice, “What do do if your talk sucks” and “What do to when things go wrong.”

There’s a lot more in the book, so I recommend that you read it, especially if you do public speaking.